Hi indie, Your slide was really good, it has lots of bright colours through out your slides! but you could work on putting in a few more slides and do all of the Waka and make the writing a bit bigger it was kind of hard to read. Other wise your slide was really good and I really enjoyed reading it.
Hi indie,
ReplyDeleteYour slide was really good, it has lots of bright colours through out your slides!
but you could work on putting in a few more slides and do all of the Waka and make the writing a bit bigger it was kind of hard to read. Other wise your slide was really good and I really enjoyed reading it.
HI lily Thank you for your comment Next time I will try to remember to make the writing bigger and add more slides.
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